Glossary entry

Italian term or phrase:

confondevano tempi, luoghi,...

English translation:

Times and places became confused

Added to glossary by Lara Barnett
Dec 12, 2017 10:44
6 yrs ago
Italian term

confondevano tempi, luoghi,...

Italian to English Art/Literary General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters Character-based fiction
Narrator, who has been trying to put his mind to writing (with a bit of writers block creeping in), has found inspiration in the novel Don Quixote. He imagines them galloping alongside each other on horses created by "paper and ink". I don't know a very good term to use here, and I also am unsure of the grammatical structure.

Le orme che la cavalcata sfrenata si lasciava dietro confondevano tempi, luoghi, incrociavano destini. Più leggevo e più avevo voglia di rimettermi a scrivere.

Proposed translations

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Times and places became confused

Turn it round a little:
Times and places became confused and .... in the tracks left by our wild gallop

Le orme che la cavalcata sfrenata si lasciava dietro confondevano tempi, luoghi, incrociavano destini.

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Note added at 1 hr (2017-12-12 12:31:41 GMT)
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I see you took the destini post down so here you go:
Times and places became confused and destinies crossed in the tracks left by our wild gallop
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
7 mins

jumbled times, places,...

Essentially "the hoofprints that our wild horse ride left behind jumbled times, places...." or switching it up "the hoofprints of our wild horse ride left behind a jumble of times, places, crossed destinies...."
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1 hr

Eras, places and destinies were all intertwined in the trail

Many ways to turn it around with a little poetic licence.

Eras (or times), places and destinies were all intertwined within the trail left behind ...
Peer comment(s):

agree Michele Fauble
5 hrs
Thanks Michele!
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2 hrs

times and places became blurred

Another possibility.
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9 hrs

Times and places intermingled, and destinies.....

Just a try...
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