Glossary entry (derived from question below)
Russian term or phrase:
стиль написания ... таков, что в них наличествует ...
English translation:
His monographs are written so that they provide ...
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Faina Furman
Apr 30, 2007 09:57
17 yrs ago
Russian term
Ukraine
careful, caring, and perfectionist
Native in: Russian 
, Ukrainian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, Ukrainian to English, and 1 more.
стиль написания ... таков, что в них наличествует
Russian to English
Science
Science (general)
scientific writing
Его стиль написания монографий таков, что в них наличествует достаточный объем формул, таблиц и графиков,...
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May 5, 2007 12:48: Faina Furman Created KOG entry
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Faina Furman
Israel
Israel
Native in Russian
Works in field
Israel
Freelance translator
Native in: Russian 
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English
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4
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His monographs are written so that they provide abundant...
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Many thanks to all of you!"
+5
3 mins
Jack Doughty
United Kingdom
United Kingdom
Native in English
United Kingdom
Translator since 1953
Native in: English
Works in: Russian to English, German to English, English
Related KudoZ points
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474
His style of writing is such that it contains...
...quite a large number of formulas, tables and graphs...
Peer comment(s):
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Arkadi Burkov
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tanyazst
1 hr
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Ravindra Godbole
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Oleg Osipov
: It is not the style, Jack, but rather an approach. You know what I mean.
7 hrs
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Olga Cartlidge
: "style" is what is used in the original and the translation should reflect this.
8 hrs
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Dorene Cornwell
: Major pickiness attack here! The Russian is grammatical albeit pompous and wordy. This example loses the monographs entirely and with it a chance at grammar AND clear pronoun antecedents.
19 hrs
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Сергей Лузан
3 days 12 hrs
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Evgeny Terekhin
United States
United States
Native in Russian
Works in field
United States
ATA-certified: literary, medical, SEO
Native in: Russian
Works in: English to Russian, Russian to English, Ukrainian to English
Related KudoZ points
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20
The style of his monographs allows for a large amount of
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+3
5 mins
Michael Moskowitz
Native in Russian
&
English
Specializes in field
Translating since 1984.
Native in: English , Russian
Works in: Russian to English, English to Russian, Ukrainian to English, and 1 more.
Related KudoZ points
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60
His monographs contain...
His monographs contain a sufficient number of ...
Peer comment(s):
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Oleg Osipov
7 hrs
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Jim Tucker (X)
: yes, I agree because tables, charts and the like really have nothing to do with style. The original is badly formulated. You are doing the author a favor. "Sufficient", though, could probably be replaced by "fairly many" or "a good number of"
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Dorene Cornwell
: Sure, a way to clean it up.
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Dorene Cornwell
Native in English
Works in field
Thorough, sensitive, and idiomatic
Native in: English
Works in: Russian to English, Spanish to English, English, and 2 more.
Related KudoZ points
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36
The writing style for his monographs is such that a quite sufficient number of ...
The writing style for his monpgraphs is such that a quite sufficient number of formulas, tables, and graphs are present.
This would be as stilted as the original and deal with the verbose construction. Of course if dleaning this up is wanted......
This would be as stilted as the original and deal with the verbose construction. Of course if dleaning this up is wanted......
1 hr
(plentiful formulas, tables and charts) characterise his style of writing
IMHO
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Note added at 2 дн3 час (2007-05-02 13:21:42 GMT)
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1.http://www.josephconradsociety.org/conradian_review_epstein....
Lucas re-examines some of the claims made by impressionistic critics by taking selected passages from six stages of Conrad’s writing career in order to isolate the markers that characterise his idiosyncratic style.
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Note added at 2 дн3 час (2007-05-02 13:21:42 GMT)
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1.http://www.josephconradsociety.org/conradian_review_epstein....
Lucas re-examines some of the claims made by impressionistic critics by taking selected passages from six stages of Conrad’s writing career in order to isolate the markers that characterise his idiosyncratic style.
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