Oct 17, 2006 08:20
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Russian term

до 5 числа месяца, следующего за месяцем, в котором произошли эти изменения

Russian to English Bus/Financial Law: Contract(s)
помогите построить фразу в п. 1.2.4
вот контекст
1.2. Страхователь обязуется:
1.2.1
1.2.2
1.2.3.
1.2.4. При изменении числа работников, застрахованных по настоящему договору, и данных о них представлять в СМО сведения о таких изменениях до 5 числа месяца, следующего за месяцем, в котором произошли эти изменения, по формам согласно приложениям №1 или № 2, 3.

1.2. The Insurer undertakes to:
1.2.4. to submit information to the MIE in formats according to Appendices 1, 2 and 3 before the 5th day of the month following the month when the changes have occurred in case of a change of the number of the employees insured under this Contract or their personal data.
нужна правка параграфа 1.2.4

Discussion

Vova (asker) Oct 17, 2006:
1 суть вопроса в том , что в моем предложении these changes стоит до той части , в которой о них написано

а изменить порядок я не могу так как стоит
1.2 the insurer undertakes to:
и далеее полшли абзацы начиная с глаголов

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- to submit information to the MIE about any changes in the number of employees insured under this Contract and/or their personal data in formats as per Appendices 1, 2 and 3 before the 5th day of the month following the month in which these changes might have occurred.

any changes уже значит "если изменения есть", но можно для усиления написать "...changes, if any,..."
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by the 5th day of the month following the month these changes occurred

"changes" can be replaced by "amendments" or "revisions", depending on the context.
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agree Jack Doughty : "...following the month in which these changes..."
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agree Mylord : by the 5th day of the month following the month these changes occurred-nice!
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agree demerchd : "occured" or "were made", again depending on context
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agree Smantha
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when there have occurred changes in...

...by the 5th day of the month following the month when there have occurred changes in the number of the employees insured under this Contract or their personal data.


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Note added at 1 hr (2006-10-17 10:01:16 GMT)
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...or in their personal data.
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