Jan 3, 2007 09:52
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Russian term

терпкий запах краски

Russian to English Other General / Conversation / Greetings / Letters
Деревья покрылись нежной зеленью первых маленьких липких листочков, но они были ещё прозрачными, и двор казался необычно большим и светлым. В нём полным ходом шёл ремонт детской площадки, и в воздухе витал терпкий запах краски.

Discussion

Irina Romanova-Wasike Jan 5, 2007:
to usdim - это все дело вкуса и конечно же зависит от последующего текста, мне лично нравится pungent, и сочетания с aroma и paint встречаются и это не совсем "жгучий", а скорее "острый". a для булочек кроме aroma можно и другие слова найти :)
usdim Jan 5, 2007:
Irina, честно говоря, мне не совсем нравится Ваш "жгучий аромат свежей краски" / Я бы "AROMA" приберег для булочек, которыми бабушки будут кормить детишек после детской площадки и для цветочков, которые последуют за липкими листочками... Если мы арому отдадим сейчас, как мы будем описывать последующие события во второй главе? :-)
Irina Romanova-Wasike Jan 4, 2007:
I'll support Zamira's suggestion since she used word "pungent" first, but I was thinking of "pungent aroma of the fresh paint" to make it sound more positive. Like "and the air was filled with the pungent aroma of fresh paint"
Zamira B. Jan 3, 2007:
А разве это не "Поэзия и литература"?

Proposed translations

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strong smell of fresh paint

предлагаю такой выход из положения.

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НАШЛА!!!

PUNGENT smell of (fresh) paint

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pun·gent (pŭn'jənt)
adj.
Affecting the organs of taste or smell with a sharp acrid sensation.

http://www.answers.com/topic/pungent
Peer comment(s):

agree Jack Doughty : with pungent
1 hr
thank you
agree Simon Gregory : And with Jack. Moreover, as you feel a poetry of upcoming spring, may be "clear smell" would be enough with more positive , easy to catch connotation, without possible negative association.
7 hrs
thank you, you suggestion does make sense in the context
agree danya : +acrid?
8 hrs
спасибо, наверное, acrid не подойдет - как Саймон отметил, уж больно контекст благостный.
agree Vanessa Fuller : agree that pungent would be particularly good in this context.
22 hrs
thank you
agree Irina Romanova-Wasike
1 day 3 hrs
спасибо
agree Olga Cartlidge
1 day 9 hrs
спасибо
neutral usdim : pungent все-таки больше - "резкий", "жгучий ", а вот к "терпкому" будет ближе - ASTRINGENT, чувствуете разницу между перцем (pepper) и неспелой хурмой (persimmon) ? :-) или скипидаром (turpentine). Краску-то скипидаром развели! 8-)
1 day 18 hrs
"pungent" как я понимаю - это еще и едкий
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harsh odor of paint

harsh odor of paint
Peer comment(s):

agree koundelev
50 mins
Спасибо!
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46 mins

tart smell of paint

Harvest....the end of the growing season....soon to be marked by bright orange pumpkins piled high at roadside stands, the spicy tart smell of apple butter cooking at local orchards, and the excitement of local fall harvest festivals.

It was the smell of the aftermath, a green smell, a smell of shredded leaves and oozing resin, of crushed wood and splashed sap, **a tart smell, which bore some relation to the smell of bitten apples.


The tart smell of nacho cheese was in
the air and literally on the floor with dozens
of crunched up nachos.
Peer comment(s):

agree Tevah_Trans : I like this one the best for the context.
3 hrs
Thank you!
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1 hr

cloying smell of paint

as an example...

"The cloying smell of fresh paint hung in the air."


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"Furniture wrapped in plastic is still stacked in rooms and the cloying smell of paint and new carpet is inescapable."http://www.abc.net.au/worldtoday/stories/s673107.htm

"cloying" as causing surfeit (here)

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reeked of paint

Russian and English being predominantly noun- and verb-oriented languages respectively, I'd translate it as 'with children's playground renovation in full swing, the air reeked of paint'.
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1 day 19 hrs

astringent smell of paint, asringent odor of paint

Господа, а почему забыли про "astringent", - красивое "терпкое" слово ?

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Also, see below:

"Oil of turpentine should be kept in well-stoppered bottles, ... it is a most efficacious astringent, and may be used in..."

http://www.henriettesherbal.com/eclectic/kings/terebinthina_...
Peer comment(s):

agree Zamira B. : She liked the *astringent smell* of the air here, with its compound of dust, floor wax, ... brushes, buckets of *paint*, home.att.net/~larrydla/twbeginning.htm
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