Mar 28, 2005 13:38
19 yrs ago
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French term
On est toujours plus efficace quand on a de gros bras !
French to English
Marketing
Advertising / Public Relations
This is a sentence from an advertising campaign for a forklift truck.
My translations are not satisfactory...do you have any idea ?
My translations are not satisfactory...do you have any idea ?
Proposed translations
(English)
| 5 +2 | Where Heavy Lifting is Our Game |
Jane Lamb-Ruiz (X)
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| 4 | The efficient way to lighten your load |
Carl Sennett
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Proposed translations
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Where Heavy Lifting is Our Game
marketing slogan
boy..they should pay for these..really
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Note added at 6 mins (2005-03-28 13:44:58 GMT)
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or Just
Heavy Lifting IS Our Game...
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Note added at 7 mins (2005-03-28 13:46:12 GMT)
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OR
Leave Your Heavy Lifting To Us....
boy..they should pay for these..really
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Note added at 6 mins (2005-03-28 13:44:58 GMT)
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or Just
Heavy Lifting IS Our Game...
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Note added at 7 mins (2005-03-28 13:46:12 GMT)
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OR
Leave Your Heavy Lifting To Us....
Peer comment(s):
| agree |
Gayle Wallimann
: I like the second one best, but the last one is good too. Depends on the customer's way of looking at it, of course...How much do we get for approvals? ;-)
5 mins
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You know Gayle, in the past, I have added that my suggestions are copyrighted because this is un tout autre truc...knowhatimean? :)
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| agree |
Guylaine Ingram
22 mins
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Indeed, your translations are really better than mine !
Thanks for your help !"
45 mins
Carl Sennett
United Kingdom
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The efficient way to lighten your load
... since they've mentioned "efficace" in their imagery I'm assuming they see it as a benefit of this product, so I would suggest keeping it in the translation somehow.
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