Nov 15, 2007 17:31
16 yrs ago
Chinese term
概要描述...。
Chinese to English
Bus/Financial
Business/Commerce (general)
business plan
这是一份方案书,看内容应该是一份概要设计之类非常精简的东西。
上下文是这样的:
(小标题1)
后面跟一到几行的简要描述。总共也就少则一句,多则几句。
(小标题2)
后面再跟一到几行的简要描述。总共也就少则一句,多则几句。
...
如:
一、{大标题}
(一)系统概述
概要描述...的体系结构。...结合...。
现在我的疑问是翻译成英文时,标题后面这一两句简要描述应该以什么样的语法、句法结构写比较合理。
比如这里,翻译成:
(1) System Outline
Provides the outline of the architecture of xxx.
是否合理?
TIA
上下文是这样的:
(小标题1)
后面跟一到几行的简要描述。总共也就少则一句,多则几句。
(小标题2)
后面再跟一到几行的简要描述。总共也就少则一句,多则几句。
...
如:
一、{大标题}
(一)系统概述
概要描述...的体系结构。...结合...。
现在我的疑问是翻译成英文时,标题后面这一两句简要描述应该以什么样的语法、句法结构写比较合理。
比如这里,翻译成:
(1) System Outline
Provides the outline of the architecture of xxx.
是否合理?
TIA
Proposed translations
(English)
4 | general description | Adsion Liu |
4 | Brief description ... | peiling |
4 | outline | Zhang Caixia (Jackie) |
3 | synopsis? | franksf |
Proposed translations
14 mins
Selected
general description
This wording occurs frequently and it sounds adaptable to your context. BTW your "system outline" seems handsome to me!
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Note added at 1 heure (2007-11-15 19:04:25 GMT)
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So you take "summarizing..., briefly describing..., ... " instead.
Good luck!
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Note added at 1 heure (2007-11-15 19:04:25 GMT)
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So you take "summarizing..., briefly describing..., ... " instead.
Good luck!
Reference:
http://ck-erp.org/drupal/index.php
http://engine.cqvip.com/content/n/85296x/2001/015/001/zk11_n4_6846716.pdf
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "Thank you Adsion Liu and peiling for your suggestions. Thanks also go to other answerers."
1 hr
Brief description ...
Brief description ...
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Note added at 1 hr (2007-11-15 19:11:21 GMT)
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可以写成passive form, 比如'xxx is described', 高兴的话可以加上 (is described) in brief.
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Note added at 1 hr (2007-11-15 19:11:21 GMT)
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可以写成passive form, 比如'xxx is described', 高兴的话可以加上 (is described) in brief.
Note from asker:
thank you |
7 hrs
synopsis?
synopsis??
8 hrs
outline
outline
Discussion
Good luck!
下面还有:
(1.2)。。。
提供系统体系结构...进行描述。
(2.2)...
图文并茂地阐述...。
(2.3)...
图文并茂地阐述...。
图文并茂的方式阐述产品的用户授权流程
(2.4)...
描述...能力。
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