Glossary entry

anglais term or phrase:

benefited

français translation:

a aidé plus de 5,4 millions de personnes

Added to glossary by FX Fraipont (X)
Jun 9, 2012 14:01
11 yrs ago
anglais term

fitted over

anglais vers français Médecine Médecine (général) humanitaire
...has been fitted over 5.4 million people through general health screening, HIV/AIDS awareness initiatives, health education and counselling outreach services
Il s'agit d'un train-clinique
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Jun 14, 2012 18:06: FX Fraipont (X) Created KOG entry

Mar 14, 2013 18:01: FX Fraipont (X) changed "Edited KOG entry" from "<a href="/profile/696296">FX Fraipont (X)'s</a> old entry - "fitted over "" to ""a aidé plus de 5,4 millions de personnes""

Discussion

orgogozo (asker) Jun 9, 2012:
Tony a certainement raison, c'est une typo "benefited" peut-être
La "phrase" avant, qui est dans une série de propositions sans majuscule devant, est:sees an average of over 45,000 patients a year, treating over 600,000 patients since 1994
Tony M Jun 9, 2012:
Please give the preceding context What we need to see is the exact words that come before your ellipsis.

I am more than ever convinced that the error here is in fact the choice of the word 'fitted', I'm wondering about a dictation error for 'visited' (but that would still also mean another word lik 'by' was missing) — as you say, it seems unlikely that so many people would actually have passed through this train, so it is probably indeed that it has been potentially available to that many people. Again, the verb 'fitted' is puzzling...
orgogozo (asker) Jun 9, 2012:
Idée... Il traversé des bassins de population représentant plus de 5,4 millions. Sans que tout ce monde n'ait bénéficié obligatoirement des services de ce train médical.
orgogozo (asker) Jun 9, 2012:
The train... ...has 18 coaches, is over 380 metres in length and weighs over 600 tonnes
Tony M Jun 9, 2012:
Mistake in source text We need to know what comes before this to know just what the mistake is?

It is likely that '[something] has been fitted to 5.4 million people' — otherwise, I can't imagine how the passive voice 'has been fitted' could possibly be followed by a direct object 'people'.

But we really do need to know what comes before, as again, it is difficult to imagine what sort of physical 'something' could be fitted to all these people through 'awareness initiatives' or 'outreach services'?? I suspect perhaps the error is in the word 'fitted' itself.

Proposed translations

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a aidé plus de 5,4 millions de personnes

"Transnet-Phelophepa is a healthcare clinic on wheels that travels into
areas of rural South Africa, where there is just one doctor for every 5,000
patients, to provide health care. Literally translated, ‘Phelophepa’ means
‘good, clean health’ and this encapsulates the essence of what the train
aims to achieve. Roche is the main external sponsor of Phelophepa,
having provided support since its first journey in 1994.

has benefitted over 5.4 million people
through general health screening,
HIV/AIDS awareness initiatives,
health education and counselling
outreach services"


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Note added at 1 hr (2012-06-09 15:04:18 GMT)
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http://www.roche.com/sust-phelophepa.pdf
Peer comment(s):

agree Tony M : Yes!
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thanks!
agree Cyril B.
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merci!
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a été appliqué(e) à

sans savoir ce qui vient avant...
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anglais term (edited): has benefitted over

a fait du bien à plus de / a été utile à plus de

Yes, Asker, I think you've hit the nail on the head!


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Note added at 1 hr (2012-06-09 15:05:21 GMT)
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As you say, the typo 'been fitted' > 'benefitted' is obvious when you think about it, probably an initial minor typo compounded by a spell-checker!

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Note added at 1 hr (2012-06-09 15:06:57 GMT)
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In other words, it has actually treated 600,000 people, and brought indirect benefits to many more people through those various channels mentioned.

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Note added at 1 hr (2012-06-09 15:09:57 GMT)
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Ignore my FR suggestions, which wouldn't be right here; but I'll leave this up just for the comments.
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a profité à

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a été utilisé avec succés pour ......

des millions de personnes
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